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- From: ssk (@ 203.106.185.24)
on: Fri Apr 13 11:50:50
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- From: Sugrutha (@ cc650039-a.avnl1.nj.home.com)
on: Fri Apr 13 13:20:16
SSK,
Just kidding :-)
en thambikku peN pArkum pOthu, en periyamma " nalla chevappAna, azhagAna poNNu=thAn pArkkaNum" enRAr. nAnum, agaththin azhagu, puRaththin azhagu, enRellAm eduththu chonnEn. athaRku avar "therinja poNNu, pidichchu pOchchu- appadInRathu vERa. nAmA pArkkumpOthu, azhagA pArththA-thAn enna thappu ? thavira, (ippo joke adikkarAr!) varrava eppadium ellArayum AttivekkaththAn pOrA, atha azhagA irunthu AttivekkattumE" enRAr !
Now seriously,
paNakkAra maNavAlan amaintha Ezhai peN, than mainthanukku enRu varumpOthu, Ezhai peNNai manamAra thERntheduppALA ?
mElum, intha kathaiyil, vENiyE than niRaththai oru kuRaiyaakath thAne eNNugiRAL ? maRRavar enna ninaiththAlum en niRaththil kuRaiyillai enRu avar eNNiyathAga kooRappadavillaiyE. KaNavaridam, "appadi ennaththAn ennidam kaNdeergaL" enRallavA kEtkiRAL.
onRai kuRaiyenRu eNNivittAl, athu nammidamE irunthAl thAn enna, kuRai kuRai-thAnE ?
- From: ssk (@ brk-22-171.tm.net.my)
on: Fri Apr 13 22:14:05
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- From: ssk (@ brk-22-171.tm.net.my)
on: Fri Apr 13 22:18:00
vanakkam Sugrutha!
unggal karuthukku mikka nandri! neenggal solvathu mutrilum unmai. indha kadhaiyil varum Veniyi kurai solla vendum enbathu en noakkam alla! naam practical-aaga seiyyum oru thavarai suttik kaatta veandum enbadhuthaan en ennam. nandri
- From: Sugrutha (@ cc650039-a.avnl1.nj.home.com)
on: Sat Apr 14 11:10:57
SSK,
mika azhakAka collap patta kathai. oru pArvaiyALaraka nIngaL kaNtathai collivittIrgaL. athai saRRu Aya vEndum enRa Aval enakku. avvaLavuthAn. menElum ezhutha vAzhththukkaL.
- From: ssk (@ brk-21-151.tm.net.my)
on: Sat Apr 14 23:33:29
unggal urchaaga moottalukku nandri sugrutha! viraivil adutha kadhaiyodu varugiren!
- From: ssk (@ bkj-cache81.jaring.my)
on: Sun Apr 15 22:31:08
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- From: Ramki (@ ws35.honovi.com)
on: Mon Apr 16 09:21:11
ssk iyalbaana padaippu . ungaL matra kadhaigaLaavaludan edhirparkkapadugiradhu
- From: Ganesh (@ 192.237.114.65)
on: Mon Apr 16 10:58:50
Thamila olunga eluthungapa... Onnume puriyamaatenguthu...
- From: ssk (@ 210.186.52.66)
on: Mon Apr 16 11:28:41
nandri Ramki! viraivil adutha padaippu varum!
- From: ravi sundaram (@ 192.149.1.187)
on: Tue Apr 17 09:10:21
SSK, first kathai? Very good.
Your title gives away the punch line. On stories that have a punch line ending, it is better not to tip the hand. Example Erumbu. http://www.forumhub.com/stories/21645.03.10.55.html
OTOH more rambling or tableu stories need a fitting title to focus the reader.
Example: Gokul's "paambum piRa kanavukaLum"
(What! the link is missing? what happened to it?
BB what happened? I see just three of Gokul's stories in the archives! oru nimisham inthap pakkam varalainna enna enna vellaam aayidaRathu!)
Use any of Gokul's stories as examples where fitting title adds 'nayam' to the story.
- From: ssk (@ brk-78-59.tm.net.my)
on: Tue Apr 17 11:35:06
ravi sundram!
thanks for your tips! I'll follow this in my other stories. thanks again!
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