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- From: bb (@ schubert.crhc.uiuc.edu)
on: Tue Mar 2 00:40:34
babu, nallaa izhukkareenga;-))) keeping the suspense going!
- From: bb (@ schubert.crhc.uiuc.edu)
on: Tue Mar 2 02:33:43
i guess he cried because she asked him "enakku thookkam varadhu, thoongalaamaa".. first nightlle thoongalaamaannu kEttadhanaala avanukku azhugai vandhuduthu:-)))))))))))
- From: babu (@ 198.153.135.42)
on: Tue Mar 2 09:32:57
Thanks balaji.
Yeah, adukku azhudhaanO ennavO :-))) good one. :-)
- From: chandy (@ 209.125.83.228)
on: Fri Mar 5 17:27:50
Babu,
Another wonderful piece from you. Excellent flow, command over language and style of narration. Apart from other things, the wife's characterization was good. You showed her maturity level just in a few lines. KUDOS!
chandy
- From: babu (@ 198.153.135.42)
on: Fri Mar 5 17:37:21
Thanks Chandy !
- From: v (@ saturn.mch.sni.de)
on: Sat Mar 6 04:51:05
babu, kadhai'oda aarvathula ungala paarata marandhadhuku mannikanum. ovoru kadhayilum neenga oru nalla ezhuthaalarndradhu nangu velipadugiradhu. superb.
- From: Gokul (@ gatekeeper.ohioedison.com)
on: Mon Mar 8 17:46:13
Good one bAbu. kadhai pichchukittu pOgudhu brake illaadha train maadiri. The end is a bit dramatic. Good language. Looking forward to more.
- From: Udhaya (@ 205.218.142.217)
on: Tue Apr 6 22:30:33
Babu,
Abu kitta mu.ka. ennathaan sonnaappaa? mandai kaayuthu engittayaavathu sollaen. Andha wife character oru badhil kadhai solli ivanai kavuththiyirundhaa? Then it won't be the same story will it? It's too bad the wife had to absolve this guy's guilt so quickly.
Anyway, great momentum in the narration. As usual your language was refined and poetic. Kept me going. You pick very universal subject matter that the character's problems begin to resonate right away for the reader. That's something quite special.
- From: babu (@ 198.153.135.42)
on: Wed Apr 7 09:53:57
Udhaya, thanks for that. When I read the response to the Part 1 of this story, for a second I thought you are scolding about me ('disgusting low life') !!! Then I understood you are talking about Aadhi :-))
That you find my language 'refined and poetic' is heartening to hear. I understand what you mean when you say that the wife has to absolve Aadhi's guilt 'so quickly'. I accept this might not happen in 'real' life, but then what I wanted to convey through this story is that 'sins' do not necessarily have the same meaning when it is done in one's adolescence. But don't think that I want all the wives of the world to absolve their husbands' immorality. I hope you understand.
Thanks again.
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on: Sun Aug 22 20:20:13
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on: Mon Aug 23 17:21:38
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on: Mon Aug 23 17:31:33
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