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- From: Kala (@ dialin1437.toronto.globalserve.net)
on: Mon Jan 10 20:27:14 EST 2000
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on: Tue Jan 11 06:29:09 EST 2000
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- From: murugan (@ 131.241.26.63)
on: Tue Jan 11 10:38:08 EST 2000
Ayyengar(enge sir poitteNga?),Ramji, Lavanya, Kala - Thanks to you all.
- From: murugan (@ 131.241.26.63)
on: Tue Jan 11 10:38:36 EST 2000
Ayyengar(enge sir poittenga?),Ramji, Lavanya, Kala - Thanks to you all.
- From: Udhaya (@ 209.36.218.65)
on: Tue Jan 11 18:48:56 EST 2000
So much activity in one week, wow. Thanks for keeping things lively here, guys.
Murugan,
Solid stuff from you. Congratulations on all your publishing achievements. All your pieces are well conceived and executed, you must be one hell of a self-editor. Keep it coming. I had the same doubt that k.r.i had about your "thalaiprasavam" piece. The atmosphere in that piece was so rich that it plants one in the rural scene instantly.
k.r.i,
You float all over the place. As Lavanya noted, you have quite an emotional range in your poems. I like your humorous ones but look for your serious ones.
Lavanya,
A grand welcome to you. Your poem shows a very unique psychology about a person offering charity. It was curious. Natpu is definitely a qualified poem. I liked it a whole lot.
Kala,
You have already established your ease with language and the poetic structure. I would have liked "Indraya Muthiyoarin Munagal" a whole lot if it had been entirely your approach, imagery, expressions dealing with the issue of aging, rather than proverbs and sayings doing it.
- From: Udhaya (@ 209.36.218.65)
on: Tue Jan 11 19:25:58 EST 2000
the guest
don't wait for the world
to offer you a catalyst
art isn't milk
to be squeezed from udders of inspiration
isolation won't make you
a prophet
nor is industry the answer
to unlock the mystery
you think you heard the calling
follow it with aspiration
get upset when it taunts you
greedy when it finds you
you never understand
your role as the carrier
the host
the whim for art
to pour itself through
yet it's usually from
feeble hearted souls
who burn themselves inside
out to birth it
that it flows best
- From: vj (@ 202.144.10.93)
on: Wed Jan 12 11:52:41 EST 2000
Udhaya,
very well written, seems like an idea close to your heart.. captures the sentiments of the world of artists, aspiring, struggling or otherwise
Great work!
- From: kr iyengar (@ tropical.com)
on: Wed Jan 12 12:34:12 EST 2000
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Art isnt milk, tobe squeezed from udders of inspiration..good one.
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- From: kr iyengar (@ tropical.com)
on: Wed Jan 12 15:17:47 EST 2000
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- From: Udhaya (@ 209.36.218.65)
on: Wed Jan 12 19:41:59 EST 2000
k.r.i
"poopparikka varugiroam" builds the mundane to startle with tragedy. The title song, especially the way it's used in the end to eerie effect is very inventive.
"mounak kaayangal"...I liked some images better than others. The lizard and the cat one's great. Aanaal bus aeri iduppil killal paduvathum sugamaana valiyil saerththiyaa? Gnyaayamaa idhu?
Both your Haikus were tops. This format serves a microcosmic candy of your talent--short, flavorful and unique.
Of your venpAs, if they're indeed venpAs, the first one is a blast. Our literary culture is just begging for such offhanded, irreverential treatment of sacred subjects. Way to go.
- From: Ramji (@ 205.177.170.111)
on: Thu Jan 13 08:34:44 EST 2000
Udhaya:
In spite of its message,"the guest" may right now be catalyst for a creation somewhere.
kr:
What a range, man! Where were you all these years?
- From: kr iyengar (@ tropical.com)
on: Thu Jan 13 08:46:33 EST 2000
Udhaya, Ramji Thanks..(Kannoeram neer)
- From: murug (@ 131.241.26.63)
on: Thu Jan 13 11:28:56 EST 2000
Thanks Udhaya. Will that wonderful 'VirundhALi' appear in Tamil?
- From: Udhaya (@ 209.36.218.65)
on: Thu Jan 13 14:16:05 EST 2000
Thanks everyone for your encouragement. Please feel free to offer suggestions, changes on the content or style of my poems. You see me taking the liberty to do so, I wish the same from you all.
Murugan, It's funny you should ask about my Thamizh, I've been thinking about it. I have a shockingly limited diction in Thamizh, besides my spelling mistakes are downright embarassing. But I have been forcing myself to try anyway. Here are a few:
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Any similarities between k.r.i's haiku and my "ethirkaalam" are purely coincidental. Those thoughts must be in the air or something as I've been working on these for a couple of days.
- From: aruLarasan (@ vengu.umsl.edu)
on: Thu Jan 13 16:05:42 EST 2000
udhaya,
a chinna (chinnaththanamAna? :-) twist to your kadaisip pA.
kaRkaL urasinAl thI.
un eNNam urasa
en nenjam
erikiRadhu.
:-))
- From: Udhaya (@ 209.36.218.65)
on: Thu Jan 13 16:25:34 EST 2000
aruL,
I like yours better than mine.
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