Topic started by Subramaniam on Mon Feb 21 22:25:19 .
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Iravil thookkathai kalaitha penne
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- From: Dhana (@ figment3.gs.com)
on: Tue Feb 22 15:57:20 EST 2000
Hi Subramani, poem rhymings are really good.
Was realy impressive
The last two lines of the poem
Azhakin moagam innum unnai vidavizhaiya
Karuppana ennai eatru kolla manam virumbavillaiya
Could you please elaborate a bit. I feel the crux of the poem lies in the above two lines, please let me know the thoughts you convey by these lines
- From: Subramaniam (@ brf-cache11.jaring.my)
on: Wed Feb 23 00:30:22 EST 2000
Thank u Dhana for u'r comments. The meanings of the last two lines are i'm pointing to the girl's interest and her ego in finding boy friend which are more brighter in skin and not accept me the, black skin men.
Am i cleared it ?
- From: Manggamma (@ jhb-151-126.tm.net.my)
on: Wed Feb 23 03:10:19 EST 2000
Iravil un tookattai kedutha antha penn
Unnai kan paarkavillaiyo
Vanthu kavi paadavillaiyo
Allathu nenjil tannai summakka unakku oridam kodukkavillaiyo???
Thavi tirintha neenggal
Paadi alaintha neenggal
Thedi negilnthe neenggal
Yen or vaalkai atyaayattai maranthiirgal???
Vilikka vendiyathu aval allave
Vaalkai yenbathai purinthu kolla marukkum neenggal thaan
Oru penn teduvathu pura alagu mattum alla
avalukku sondhamaanavanin aga alagaiyum kooda
Pura alagai oru vinaadiyil rasittu vida koodum
aanal aga alagu appadi allave anbare???
Oru velai avalai oru nodi paarthu neenggal
Avalai tedi negilvathu niyaayam andre???
Oru penn manam menmaiyaanathu
Oru poovai pondrathu
Oru poovei nogadippathum nandrandre
Antha poovaal thaanggal noguvathu yenbathum
NIYAAYAMANDRE
Unmai kaadhalai tedunggal
Niccayam kaipatruveergal
Aanal poovil ulla mullai aarayaatheergal
yenyendraal mul yendraale yendraikkume
kaayattaithaan yetpaduttum, anbare!
- From: Nakkeeran (@ unknown-24-8.pilot.net)
on: Wed Feb 23 08:02:40 EST 2000
En kavithaikku karuvaanavazhe (alladhu) karuvaanavaLE ??
Azhakin moagam innum unnai vidavizhaiya (alladhu) vidavillaiyaa??
Maerkkanda ezhuththup pizhaigaLaith thavirththirukkalaamo?
(Aangila script-ilum kutram kandupidikka en pondra NakkeerargaL thavaruvadhillai!)
Niram kuraivaaga iruppadhainaal kaadhali kidaikkavillaiyo endra Ekkam ik kavidhaiyil thonikkiradhu. Aayinum kavidhai idhayaththaith thodum vannam illai.
Melum jeevanuLLa kavidhaigaLai thaangaL padaippeeraaga.
NalvaazhthukkaL.
anbudan,
Nakkeeran
Another observation:
This poem has already appeared at the Miscellaneous poems thread.
I think the person who maintains this site has moved all the indivual poems into Miscellaneous poems thread. (You may see your poem there : http://forumhub.com/poems/6100.29706.16.05.05.html) And probably since you didn't find your poem under http://www.forumhub.com/poems/ you have re-posted it. Am I right?
Since this page contains the main categories like English translations of Tamil poems, Original English poems, Kamban, ...... I think it will be better to post individual poems inside any one of these categories and not in the main topics page.
- From: bb (@ ts001d03.cha-il.concentric.net)
on: Thu Feb 24 02:52:50 EST 2000
nakkeeran is right. please post your poems at Misc poems thread. that is the place where others can read and interact. it will be difficult if a thread is started for each poem.
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