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- From: Reka (@ atl-qbu-zpm-vty73.as.wcom.net)
on: Sun May 9 01:10:17
Shiva and Udhaya, thanks for your comments.
Udhaya, as u have pointed out, i could have avoided "evvaaREnum" in "virisal".
My poem "Amma" has been published in "ARaamthiNai" in their "Mothers Day"-special section.
http://www.chennaionline.com/aaraamthinai/mothersday/page04.asp
Many thanks to the Forum-Hubers for your continued encouragement.
- From: Reka (@ atl-qbu-zpm-vty73.as.wcom.net)
on: Sun May 9 01:12:10
There is a typo in the last para of the poem...
Please read "vizigaLum" in the last para as "vidhigaLum"
- From: chanakya (@ m37.chn.vsnl.net.in)
on: Sun May 9 11:46:26
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- From: bb (@ bernstein.crhc.uiuc.edu)
on: Mon May 10 07:42:11
ramani, your 3-2-3s are excellent. if others are interested, u can start a separate thread, or can continue in the haiku thread, as it seems very interesting to explore!
- From: bb (@ bernstein.crhc.uiuc.edu)
on: Mon May 10 07:51:18
here are my first tries:))
Adhavan saayum nEram
onRusErum kudumbam
paLLiyil oRRaik kuzhandhai
Adhavan saayum nEram
indraiya seidhigaL
kuppaikku pOgum dhinasari.
- From: Udhaya (@ 205.218.142.217)
on: Mon May 10 15:21:09
bb,
I concur with you, the 3-2-3s are great. I would vote for a separate thread for it.
Your first tries seem to use the same first line which adds a delicious twist to the 3-2-3. Why don't you keep going? Your third lines are crisp payoffs. Maybe you have found the perfect form for your quick wit.
I'll be back to give a thorough review of some of the earlier poems, guys.
- From: aruLarasan (@ psiphi.umsl.edu)
on: Mon May 10 15:24:19
bb,
observe "kuppaikkup pOgum thinasari" and "paLLiyil oRRaik kuzhandhai". :-))
- From: bb (@ bernstein.crhc.uiuc.edu)
on: Mon May 10 15:27:42
aruL:))))))
udhaya: we can bunch this up with the haiku thread which is anyway stagnating.
- From: Ramji (@ 205.177.170.56)
on: Mon May 10 15:28:00
3-2-3 s are really intriguing, keep it up lowPU and bb. A separate thread may be a good idea.
- From: Chandra (@ viking2.delta-air.com)
on: Tue May 11 20:02:33
This 3-2-3 looks like a n-Ericai akaval in essence.
Good to see these experiments which help us understand the spirit behind the marapbuppAs.
Makes me wonder whether such experiments did not take place thousands of years ago long before agaththiyans codified the classic forms.
Looks like we are rediscovering in a benign way those truths.
I am sure this form will help people find the techniques for writing n-Ericai akavals with good penultimate adis.
Good show guys!
- From: Ramji (@ 205.177.170.105)
on: Tue May 11 21:24:47
Saw that 3-2-3s are continuing in Haiku and IMO such serious and professional literary works and efforts should belong in such separate threads.
This miscellaneous kavithaigaL thread should retain its original lounge-like, relaxed and relaxing atmosphere which inspired even a novice like me to venture poetically, (if I may call it that). I call upon contributors like Reka, Udhaya, Gokul, Kanchana,Sathiya, vj, Nalini, MPR, et al to visit here more often and help perpetuate the comradery quality of this thread.
- From: no title for this (@ compq1.crhc.uiuc.edu)
on: Wed May 12 07:04:11
came to write a poem
but stopped midway.
words came falling out,
only to go so fast that
i couldn't capture them,
i couldn't squeeze them,
pour their juices to my heart,
see myself in them.
tis a quirk of fate
some wait for words to show up,
some wait for words to catch up,
some wait for words to slow up,
i wait...wait for words to become words.
kavidhai ezhudhidak kaaththirukka vENdum
kadhaigaL sedhukkidak kaaththirukka vENdum
vidhaigaL vaLarndhidak kaaththirukka vENdum
vidhigaLum mArumO inRu?
- From: Ramji (@ 205.177.170.57)
on: Wed May 12 11:25:05
Glad you did not wait too long:)) are u bb? whoever you are, keep going:)
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on: Wed May 12 15:55:20
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- From: Reka (@ atl-qbu-zpa-vty26.as.wcom.net)
on: Thu May 13 20:23:27
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- From: bb (@ bernstein.crhc.uiuc.edu)
on: Fri May 14 11:50:16
reka, what is vakudu?
- From: thathuvavaathi (@ 207.247.192.254)
on: Fri May 14 15:40:10
thalaikku vaki(u)du eduppadhu pOl kaattu marangaLai vetti viizhthuthal ??? (enviro ?)
- From: bb (@ bernstein.crhc.uiuc.edu)
on: Fri May 14 16:23:14
TV, that is what i thought, but felt that was too farfetched, and this being vakudu and not vagidu, thought it might have some other meaning. reka?
- From: sachu (@ 205.177.170.80)
on: Fri May 14 17:24:08
rekha
enjoyed your maa marangaL.especially,
"uyaRndhu vaLara vaLara......
.....vaanam vegu dhooramillai"
arumayaana thathuvathai , yeLimayaaga vadithirukkiReeRgaL.
- From: Reka (@ atl-qbu-zpc-vty39.as.wcom.net)
on: Fri May 14 23:22:15
bb, thathuvavaathi -- thats 'vagidu' only. didnt realise i had used 'vagudu'. thankyou bb, for pointing that out.
btw, i have used 'vagidu' to mean 'a path'. IMO, its not necessary always that one has to cut down the trees to make a path.
nadakka nadakka amaivadhu dhAnE paadhai?!
Thanks Sachchu.
- From: ;-) (@ 129.81.216.120)
on: Sat May 15 19:18:26
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- From: bb (@ bernstein.crhc.uiuc.edu)
on: Sat May 15 19:54:05
kaaththaala 4.30lle irundhu utkaarndhu match paathu thOththup pOna veRuppile ingE vandhaa, ingeyumaa:))))
- From: Ramani (@ 129.81.216.120)
on: Mon May 17 23:16:59
Hi,
some of my postings under another thread, 'Or Izaththuk kazaikkUththAdiyin n-AdOdi n-AdkuRippukkaL' in this forum may be seen at
http://www.angelfire.com/ri/mayurathi/index.html
(an error in counting the diary pages between 160-200 over there :-( Don't mind it ;-))
- From: nalini (@ 169.144.84.64)
on: Tue May 18 13:32:45
Couple of late responses:
bb, liked your "no title" poem. Looks like the words and thoughts just tumbled out naturally :-)
Reka, A hearty congratulations on getting published!
- From: Reka (@ atl-qbu-zph-vty46.as.wcom.net)
on: Tue May 18 17:51:44
Nalini, thanks!:-)
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on: Tue May 18 22:10:20
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on: Tue May 18 22:36:34
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